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CONVERSATION WRITING : Assignment Unit 5 (Complaints)



 Number 2: Create a new version (Provide better customer service in your version)






Mr. Carr: Hallo, Mr. Nadimi.



Mr. Nadimi: Hallo, Mr.Carr I have a big problem about you enigeer. Mr. Bains he doesn’t work.



Mr.Carr: I’m sorry to hear that and I’ll call to Mr.Bains gain.



Mr. Nadimi: Ok. So how do you response with him? Because my work was delayed.



Mr.Carr: I will provide the best solution by send engineer as soon as possible for you .



Mr. Nadimi: Ok. I get it but don’t make the event like this.



Mr.Carr: Thank you and apologize for him.



Mr. Nadimi: Bye. Thank you.

Solution

The main idea is my engineer can’t work his job. In my opinion I think we should give to discount to Mr. Nadimi for apologize from my company and sent a new engineer to help his work



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           Number 3 : Imagine you are Peter Carr. Following the above phone call and then a conversation with Mr.Bains, write a fax to Mr.Nadimi. Tell him Mr.Bains will return in four days with the parts and the system will be repaired within five days. Use the fax template.





STELLA COMMUNICATION PLC.

PO BOX 45, 27 PARKWAY, HALL GREEN, BIRMINGHAM BH56 4TR ENGLAND

PHONE 44 121 312 769/221 FAX: 44 121 312 593





FAX TO: Hamid Nadimi                                                                   FROM: Peter Carr

Ahmed Al-Hamid & Company

Fax number 966 1 367933



No of Pages (INC. this one): 1                                                          DATE: 4 March 1995





ATTN: Hamid Nadimi – Operations Director



RE: Peter Carr - Customer  Service



Following our telephone conversation  I am pleased to tell you that Mr.Bains will return in four days  with the relevant parts and will repair the system within five days.



If there is any way I can be of further assistance, please contact to me again.



Once again, please accept  my apologies for the delay .



Furthermore, let me assure you of our best standards of service in future.



Best regards. 



Peter Carr
Peter Carr
Customer Service


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